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      3/30 A Childhood with Better Lighting

      Rewriting Memories

      Never mind the bombs or images of war

      Or the blind kid on the bus singing trying to make a living

      How did we neglect the hungry and the destitute and the old?

      But time does not forget

      It just plays in a private theater

      Like a matinee waiting for me to come in and watch

      Amidst all that chaos and madness

      There was a beautiful, picturesque sense to it all

      In the open road

      Or plazas people went about their way

      Beyond color and smell

      More than taste and touch

      Like music

      Some of those brighter recollections overshadow the sad

      But I never forgot about that boy

      Clothes torn

      Hanging on singing with a gifted voice until the next bus stop

      Collecting whatever he could

      My grandmother giving me a few coins to place in his hand

      A life lesson in understanding – how good we had it

      Maybe he grew up to be man

      And found a way to make a living

      And found someone to love him

      And had children of his own

      But in rewriting this memory

      I wish I could have given more

      • This is fire Wally..!

        Love the prose form…

        (I had planned a while ago to alternate between rhyme and prose…

        I think the next two at least I will write in prose…)

        I thought of writing all of these NaPo poems in prose…

        Then went with rhyme shifts and literary angles…

        Prose with enjambment works well for story based pieces…

        Nice addition to your 2026 NaPo collection…

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