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Author’s Note:
This piece is inspired by “The Common Journey”, by Josh Bond, the fifth poem of thirty, selected by Veronika Bond. This poem, as with all of Josh’s poems, is filled with literary intricacies and mechanisms, from the subtle to the more pronounced, which he uses, adroitly, to pace the poem and create an ambiance for the message he is seeking to convey.
I love how he uses shortening lines and repetition to bring the reader right in, as well as lengthening lines, to bring about a greater scope of vision, understanding and wisdom.
The metaphors in this piece are exquisite.
The lengthening stanzas portray, on a structural level, a lengthening journey. There is no rhyme in the poem until stanza five of six, where appears a turning in the poem, mid stanza, just dazzling wordplay, bringing the reader into a deeply satisfying resolution.
The sparse punctuation emphasizes the smooth flow of the poem.
The jutting line lengths and lengthening stanzas, with white space, give the feel of waves and the northern lights, settling into consciousness and perception.
In thinking about this NaPo, what I might write, I thought to write poems inspired by Josh’s poems.
I wasn’t shore if that was the right thing to do.
I was thinking about it…
At DeepUndergroundPoetry, the site we all belonged to…
[There are some of us still around…]
At DUP…
[Twas a place worthy of legend and song… :ppp]
Actually, I have been pondering how I might write a story about it.
But yes…
I was thinking about when one of the members, Jade Pandora passed and LDF wrote poems inspired by poems from one of Jade’s published works.
I was also thinking of when Eerie passed, during that NaPo, last year, 2025, which was in Eerie’s honor, Wally (Sir Walter), wrote all thirty poems, as poetic responses inspired by Eerie’s poems.
Twas a beautiful thing seeing humans do cool stuff for humans.
Poets do cool stuff for poets.
So I decided I will write poetic responses and poems to Josh’s NaPo poems.
The sharing of poetry is such an intimate thing.
Such next level communication.
Truly.
Writing poetry to poetry…
Is next level to next level.
I have been goin deep in my communications with Sir Joshua.
(On a side note… My son’s name is Joshua. Which is the best of things.)
I am grateful for this call to adventure, these calling of the currents.____________________________________________
The Common Journey By Josh Bond
Piecing together the mystery
of one's own life can take an awful long time sometimes Sometimes I mistake the dots that were meant to be joined up for the perforations on the piece of paper lined up on the left-hand side Sometimes I dabble without thought or care then my life lurches one way or in too many others Sometimes I've had enough want to throw out the towel with the dishwater and say it's all too much this trying to make sense of a life gone adrift got twisted and stretched itself far too flat perhaps the reason I then pull out all the stops gather together whatever I find long lost bits discarded widgets shredded threads and forgotten bobs all my splintered selves in clever disguise... The real reason I'm willing to dig deeper go further be brave and heroic driven by renewed purpose, vision, or aim is the common journey that binds us together a knowing that we are never abandoned for in shared experience we meet self and same
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Clouds Without A Home By Pablo Cipher_O Martinez“Each of us is a traveling cloud, containing the rain of our pain. Each of us is a traveling cloud, keeping each other in the sky so that we might fly.” – Cipher_O
Clouds Without A Home
The poet roams the night
time city scapes
in stepsLate night head light
from afar
to
close. light
on
in car. unknown
star
getting composed
drifting – disappearing: out of sight
Shadowed by a being on a bike
urchins
of
the night
night riding – Out of sightUnraveling in the road less traveled
i travelthe side streets
and
secret paths
where seers meet secret pacts
and secretseals are formed
from
secret acts
It took me a long time to be found by being lost
every street
met
by these
feet
carries arrays
of everyone’s
varied
ways
i see
everyone’s
variations
varied across the days
Clouds Without A Home
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Cipher
Pohms
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